Respond toward comments

        First of all, I would like to say thank you for those who regards my article highly and for those who points out drawbacks. All your opinions, no matter praise or criticize, help me write better.

        For many readers has suggested me to put more specifically about Chinese and Taiwanese car industry by, for example, comparing the " the pros and cons of Chinese and Taiwanese cars". To this point, I admit that it is necessary for me to clarify my thoughts and examples I chosen in more detail since not everyone knows a lot about Taiwanese car industry, let alone understanding the outside challenge from mainland China. However, it is not likely that I compare Chinese and Taiwanese cars from product to product. After all, the title of my article is about the whole industry chains instead of a driving report of few cars.

       Thus, I change several sentence at the bottom paragraph two and put in more adjective to make more clear. There are also several mistakes in sentence form that may distract my readers from getting my gist. Besides, I added " Taiwanese cars are still under the shell of local market" to make the transaction between paragraph two and three more smoothly. Then by this revision, I think I have made my angle  clear enough that I don't have to put more comparison in Chinese and Taiwanese car industry, which may make my structure redundant.