Respond toward Suggestion2

     To start with, some readers advised me to notice several grammar errors, especially for rule of quotation. In an interview quotation, according to grammar, for example “ “------ “ said Henry” , to clarify who makes the announcement, we often use V+S structure instead of S+V since it is an inverted sentence. I accept this idea. However, in my opinion, form is flexible if situation requires. Hence, S+V is sometime acceptable if it can convey ideas more clearly.

     Besides, some suggest that I should add more innovative elements into my article for instance the angle from shopkeepers, since 宵夜街 has already been well-known among NCU students. I admit I neglect this part. Initially, I just want to clear out how NCU students feel about 宵夜街 and why they like or oppose it. Thus, I vary my last paragraph. I talk more about the obstacle for future of 宵夜街 may face and what exactly school authority can do to make it better.

     Then, some says the quotation is vague in some way and my thought inside is not strong enough. To this point, I’ve revised word-form, hoping it will make the quotation is more concrete. Moreover, I’ve added my sincere wish to the future of 宵夜街 at the end of my work.

     In the long run, I want to show my gratitude toward those who gives complements and suggestions. Reader’s opinions make me write more perfect.